THE WIDOW’S LAWMAN!! PART TWO

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Things are gettin’ hot here in Sheridan, and I think most of the heat is comin’ from the Sheriff’s office…

Ellie shifted on the hard seat of the ladder-back chair and stiffened her spine.  She laced her fingers together and squeezed one hand with the other to keep from landing a blow to the good Sheriff Jake Avery’s face. His large hands gripped the front of his desk as the waves of his laughter slapped against her.  He’d blinked twice at her proposition to rob a train, and then… this…laughter so deep his tight stomach rolled and teardrops rested on long dark blond eyelashes.  He even snorted a couple times.

Refusing to let the insult of his laughter humble her, Ellie never allowed her gaze drop to her lap or shift from his face. If he thought her insane, he had cause. She’d give him that much. Over the past week she’d called on Jake for everything from a cat stuck in a tree, one she’d chased up that tree, to a broken fence she said her neighbor cut allowing her cattle to scatter. Jake spent all day and well into the night helping her round up the cattle she’d let lose by cutting her own fence.  These were just two of the awful things she’d done all to test Jake’s patience, endurance and trustworthiness. And he’d passed. 

Oh, she’d noticed the tick in his clenched jaw, the looks toward the heavens and clenched fists. But Jake was a man who saw a job through no matter how frustrating, or distasteful. She’d also been introduced to how quick he could open a safe without the combination when she “forgot” the combination to her husband’s safe. And through a series of other mishaps, she’d been schooled in his skill with armaments of any variation. She’d heard the stories, now she knew the man. So, if he wanted to play the buffoon and howl with laughter for a few moments at her expense she’d allow it…this time.

But lordy, she wished he’d be quick about it, she was about to melt in a pool of blue satin from all the clothes she was layered into from bloomers to corset to the indigo dress she’d worn with the infernal feather hat to match. It was a dress her late husband brought back to her from his last trip to Australia. Jim saw her in it once when he took her out to a celebratory supper.  He’d fallen ill the next day, and the dress was hidden in mothballs until she aired it out two days ago for her meeting this morning.

The pain in her left hand alerted her that memories were causing her to clamp down too hard. She cleared her throat in effort to speed things along. The sheriff’s laughter died with a sputter as his gaze met hers and his right eyebrow hitched.

“You’re not laughin’?”

“Because it wasn’t a joke, Sheriff Avery. I want you to help me rob a train.”

The man might be thick, but she couldn’t deny he was the best looking man she’d ever laid eyes on. Please Jim, forgive me. He was lean and hard with high cheekbones and a square chin that could use shaving, but those whiskers would feel oh so nice against her palm or cheeks or other soft places…She shifted in her seat again. This time her discomfort had nothing to do with the hard wood under her bottom and everything to do with a burning low in her belly. A shock of hair the color of wheat ready to be harvested rested on his forehead and gave the only illusion of softness to the sheriff as his warm coffee brown eyes turned cold and narrowed.

He folded his arms across his broad chest stretching the sleeves of his green chambray shirt over strong biceps.  “I’m the sheriff. I don’t rob trains.”

The tick in his jaw returned and Ellie hated she’d inflicted a man with an ailment. He’d looked much nicer with his eyes crinkled in humor and a deep dimple in his left cheek.

She swallowed and tightened her hold on her left hand. “But you have…robbed a train.”

A cloud must have rolled over the sun because shade enveloped the room with silence. She stared at him. He stared at her. Neither blinked. Her blood rushed to her ears pounding if deafening beats.  Ellie doubted she would have heard him speak even if his lips moved.  She was sure life continued on the streets of Sheridan. Why Mrs. R.B. Stephenson was advertising the arrival of the newest Parisian patterns and walking hats at The Bazaar, and Dr. Frackelton just returned to Sheridan the day before surely there was a line at his office of those long overdue for dental work. But by the unbearable lack of sound Ellie would swear only tumble weeds rolled down Main Street.

One word thundered through the small office. “Why?”

Her forehead cooled with perspiration as her cheeks turned to fire. “Why?”

He pushed forward until he hung over the desk his palms flat against the honey colored wood. “Why do you want to rob a train Mrs. Reed?  Just for the helluva it, or are ya rubbin’ my nose in past shit?”

She bit her bottom lip at the crude language. He must be in a rage to purposely try to insult her. He’d never sworn in her presence. Not when the cat clawed his arm, or a heifer stepped on his foot. The words scrolled in his eyes, but he’d never muttered them out loud.  Her teeth released her lip and caught him watching the action with warm intent. His Adam’s apple bobbed in a slow swallow. Well at least she could make him as uncomfortable as he was making her.

“I assure you this has nothing to do with your past, and everything to with mine. Something belonging to my late husband will be on a train traveling through Wyoming in a month. I want it.”

“What is it?”

“I’ll tell you when you agree to help me.”

Deep lines creased his forehead and her fingers itched to push the errant lock of hair out of his eyes. “I don’t like games, Ellie.”

She leaned toward him still hovering until their noses almost touched. When she breathed in and inhaled the scent of coffee, sage, leather and man she realized her mistake, but as she always did she forged forward. “Good. I don’t play games, Jake.”

He dropped back onto his chair and stared at her again the fingers of one of his hands drumming on the flat surface. After another eternity passed his shoulders lifted and fell. “Okay, I’ll bite. What are we stealing?”

Her shoulders collapsed in relief and she folded one of his hands in both of hers without thinking. “Thank you, thank you, thank you.”  When his hand squeezed hers she tried to remove it, but his grip tightened.

“What’s gonna be on that train, Ellie?”

She let the use of her given name slide a second time. “A horse.”

“Must be a thoroughbred or somethin’?”

“No, he’s just a ranch horse. Mountain born and bred and the finest equine on earth. He was Jim’s and I want him.”

His straight nose wrinkled as though her plan smelled of manure. “Risk our necks for some ol’ ranch horse?  Hell, ya can get some of the best horseflesh right here.”

“But Jim didn’t ride through the brush and over half of Australia for any of the horseflesh around here. And none of these horses were trained by Jim. I don’t want any other horse.”

“And what do I get out of the deal?”

“What do you want?”

His hand hugged hers. She’d forgotten they were still holding hands and the fire in her belly turned to an inferno that was reflected in his eyes. His gaze wandered over her from the low neckline of her dress to the tip of the tallest feather in her hat.  The bodice of her dress grew tight as her breasts grew heavy and her chest expanded with each deep breath. If he asked for her would she give him rights to her body?  She wet her parched lips with her tongue and followed his gaze as it landed on her mouth. Yes. Forgive me Jim, she whispered to herself. But she’d been a long time without a man and Jake Avery could fill that ache and then some.

His mouth curved in a slow smile and she waited prepared to act shocked and then acquiesce.

“Half your spread.”

She huffed and jerked her hand away, and then his words found their mark in her brain. She shot to her feet.  “Half my what?”

Copyright @ 2013, by Kirsten Lynn (This is an original work of Kirsten Lynn any attempt to reprint part or all of this work is strictly prohibited)

THE WIDOW’S LAWMAN!! PART ONE!

This story is for those 18 or older! If you are not 18, please wait a few years and then come on back! Thanks for abiding by the campfire rules!

Well folks, if ya read the preview for this story last week ya got a glimpse into a writer’s life. About two lines into the story the hero saw fit to tell me his real name is Jake not Russ. See he’s a man used to given out alias and he plum didn’t think it might be nice for me to know his real name. He’ll pay for that.  Then I forgot to scroll up and change it, so my apologies for any confusion…Now on to Jake and Ellie’s story…Darn people in my head…

Sheridan, Wyoming (Spring 1899)

“Hell’s fire and sweet damn! Not her…not today.” Sheriff Jake Avery dropped the shade and stepped back from the window.  One week, one damn week on the job and he’d suffered through at least thirty visits from the widow Ellie Reed.  Next time a lawman offered the choice between swinging from a rope or taking over as sheriff, Jake was gonna choose hangin’…hands down. Hell, he’d even take his own horse and rope and find the cotton wood suitable to get the job done.

A small shadow crossed over the shade and Jake almost tripped over his own boots getting to his desk and falling into his chair. Holding his breath he started thumbing through handbills. If he wasn’t breathing and looked busy maybe she’d just keep going.

“Please Lord have mercy on a miserable sinner.”

“Sheriff Avery, I have a matter I wish to discuss with you.” The widow blew in like a dust storm on the prairie flipping up the shade as she passed by the window.

Jake narrowed his eyes against the flood of light as the woman settled into the chair on the opposite side of his desk. He squeezed his eyes shut then opened them in measured centimeters transforming a black shadow figure into the young widow.  Her brown eyes flashed bright with eager intent and her cheeks were brushed with heightened color.  Jake’s gut squeezed and that morning’s cooked oats turned sour. There’d be no mercy today.

He opened his mouth and tried to form a proper greeting.

“Are you afraid it might rain in your office, Sheriff?”

His eyebrows tugged together. “Pardon?”

That bright brown gaze shifted up to the top of his head and then back to drill into him. Her head cocked to one side tipping her own hat with an abundance of feathers died a dark blue to match her dress. The blasted thing brought to mind the remains of a wild dog cut loose with a bunch of peacocks.

Her voice cut into his wayward musings.  “Your hat. Isn’t it customary for a gentleman to remove his hat inside and in the presence of a lady?”

Jake launched his chair back with his legs and yanked off the offending piece of head gear. Damn widow woman. Comin’ into his office and talkin’ to him like he was some goddamned boy in short pants and not the Sheriff of Sheridan, Wyoming.  

“My apologies, Ma’am.” He gritted out as he slammed his hat on a hook by the door. Hell, if he had a lick of sense he’d walk out that door, step into leather and ride hell bent for…Where?  No answer came from above or below, so Jake turned back to the thorn he was charged to carry.

Sliding back into his chair he laced his fingers together on top of the desk to keep from wrapping them around the widow’s neck.  He stretched out his long legs under the desk, and forced his mouth to curve into what he hoped looked like a grin not a grimace. 

Her full red lips turned in a smile as she gave a short nod of approval.

If she wasn’t such a pain in a man’s ass, Mrs. Reed might be considered attractive by some men’s standards.  Her skin wasn’t the milk white of a woman who stayed inside, but was tanned by the sun testifying that she wore work clothes more often than the fancy get up she sported today.  And her eyes were more of a light caramel than mud brown like his.  She wasn’t a plump woman by any means, but she had a woman’s curves and enough meat a man would know he was holding something.

“Now, since I gather you’re not going to offer me a cup of coffee, or any refreshment, I’ll just get down to business.”

Yep, but there it was…that mouth.  She opened that mouth and any softness brewing in Jake disappeared like mountain peaks on a cloudy day.

“Mrs. Reed, I’m pretty busy this mornin’. Fact is I was headed out when you came in…”

She crossed her small hands over her lap. “No you weren’t, Sheriff Avery, you were sitting right there in that chair thumbing through handbills.”

“I don’t much like bein’ called a liar, Ma’am.”  Even when he was one, he reminded himself.

“I’m sorry…” She waved a hand in front of her face as though erasing what she just said. “I’ll be quick. This past week I’ve been testing you.”

“Testing me?”

“Yes, to see if you’ll do.”

“See if I’d do what?”

“Help me rob a train.”

Copyright @ 2013, by Kirsten Lynn (This is an original work of Kirsten Lynn any attempt to reprint part or all of this work is strictly prohibited)

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COWBOYS AND LAWMEN BLOG HOP WINNER OF $10 GIFT CARD!

YEEE-HAW!!!  Thank y’all so much for comin’ by the campfire, during the Cowboys and Lawmen blog hop! We had ourselves a real fandango and it was a pleasure meetin’ so many nice people! Hope y’all will come back and read the rest of THE WIDOW’S LAWMAN.  If nothin’ else to support Sheriff Avery…that boy’s gonna need it. :)   Well I dug deep into my Stetson and the winner of the $10 Amazon Card is….

SHADOW!!

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–Kirsten Lynn

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

COWBOY CHARM: COWBOYS AND LAWMEN BLOG HOP!!!

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HOWDY! Welcome to the campfire! Grab a cup of coffee and make yourself to home. Find a seat on a hollowed out log, a bedroll spread on the ground, or a sexy cowboy’s lap!  ;)    I write spicy Western Historical Romances, and I LOVE talking about cowboys and lawmen from the past, when the West was wild in all sorts of delicious ways (or current sexy cowboys and lawmen, I’m not particular).

I’m not published, YET, so I’m sorry I can’t offer a free book, BUT don’t let it be said we’re cheap here on the trail. For one lucky commenter I’m offering a $10 Gift Card from Amazon or B&N, winner’s choice!! And of course, all commenters will have a chance at the Grand Prize…A $100 Gift Card from Amazon or B&N!!!!

BUT that’s not all…Cookie show them what else we have…Oh fine, I’ll do it myself…Since y’all so generously stopped by, I’m giving a preview of my next FREE READ to be featured here starting May 11, 2013!! So keep on reading to the end of the post!  If you’re new to the site, I’ve published two free reads here, “Race to Marry” and “Christmas Stroll” please take a look.

OH and if you’re new Cookie is my sidekick and I don’t keep him around for his biscuits…if ya get my drift.

Okay enough jabberin’ let’s get to the reason y’all stopped by…

What’s fun about writing lawmen in the old west is they were a colorful bunch, and often chosen from a lawless bunch.  A writer can bring these dichotomies into Western romances to create multidimensional heroes.  All but two of my stories take place in Wyoming. It’s where I grew up, where I returned after a brief absence, and the place I love.  Most of Wyoming’s early lawmen were men with less than desirable pasts who were elected because: 

1.) A town wanted a man who would look the other way regarding other nefarious deeds

2.) The best way to catch a thief is to hire a man who knows how they think

3.) These were men were respected or feared enough to keep law and order

One Wyoming lawman had all these characteristics and his life reads like a great plot for a book. This was William Galispie “Red” Angus (Even the name is great! Don’t you love it! Oops, sorry).

Born in 1849, William Angus grew up in Kansas when the territory was in the throes of a nasty guerrilla war over slavery. This warfare took its toll on young Angus.  In 1862, when he was only 12 years old, he demanded that he be allowed to enlist in the Union army. He joined as a drummer boy.  When discharged in 1865, at the ripe old age of 15, he’d witnessed some of the worst fighting of the Civil War, but instead of quelling his desire for danger he embraced it. Angus found work as a freighter in western Kansas, when such employment was considered highly dangerous.  The Cheyenne, Arapahoe and Lakota Sioux were active in the area, and Angus was in Fort Wallace in 1867 during its siege.

Surviving these hostilities, Angus joined the 19th Kansas Volunteer Cavalry and participated in a campaign against the Cheyenne. He was discharged in 1869, and though you’d think he’d had his quota of excitement he refused to seek a quiet life. He resumed freighting between Kansas and Oklahoma, and then worked for three years in Texas as a cowboy before spending a year as a teamster in Guatemala.  He made his way back to the United States through California where he again found work as a cowboy and finally made his way to Wyoming driving a herd in 1880.  He first came to Prairie Dog Creek in northern Johnson County, but relocated to Buffalo in 1881.

Not shockingly, Red Angus had red hair and though normally easygoing he possessed a fierce temper when riled. He was also known as a man whose courage was without question.  In Buffalo, he became part of the Laurel Avenue and saloon crowd. Laurel Avenue being the area of Buffalo that catered to the baser needs of men.  Angus became known as the “Mayor of Laurel Avenue,” and his first wife had been a prostitute in one of the brothels. He was no stranger to run-ins with the law. Territory v. Angus was the first criminal case filed in Johnson County. Angus was charged with assault for pistol-whipping a man. Tried and convicted in 1882, he paid of a fine of $80 with $5 charge for court costs.

Nearby Fort McKinney was a primary economic force in Johnson County, but cattle raising was the butter on the bread supporting a great number of cowboys and a few rich men. Big cattle companies dominated the southern half of the county, while smaller family outfits filled the northern half.  Big cattle outfits in southern Johnson County, whether or not they held title, occupied and monopolized huge chunks of land, more than they could ever legally claim. They asserted rights under fictitious legal theories like “range rights” and “accustomed ranges.”

So what does that have to do with Red Angus?

By 1884, Red took an interest in becoming a lawman and started working toward that goal. He built a new saloon and became a bar man. He served on the town council and was elected chief of the fire department earning the respect of the citizens of Buffalo.

Trouble was brewing at the same time Red Angus was preparing to run for sheriff.  The year 1888 saw huge divisions in Johnson County. Officials from the northern portion petitioned the Territorial Government to become its own county, Sheridan County, and won. Also, after a series of disastrous winters the cattle barons and small ranchers were scrapping for any grazing lands.

It was during this heated time, Red Angus, likable bar owner closely associated with Buffalo brothels ran against Frank Canton, model of an efficient sheriff. But the respect Angus had been earning swayed voters in Red’s favor. And in the community of Buffalo, owning a bar and having “unsavory associations” at brothels wasn’t always a bad thing.  In the general election, Angus won 509 to 379. Angus’ election was contentious because it was well known he supported the small cattle ranchers, those the cattle barons accused of being rustlers. 

By 1891 and 1892, this small Wyoming County was described by national papers as “a raw and brutal haven for range pirates,” and “the most lawless town in the country.” A county “under the control of criminals so maliciously confident that they had begun naming big cattlemen to be put to death.”   Charges and countercharges were flung from one camp to the other.  It wasn’t long before the battle of words turned to a series of lynchings and other hostilities perpetrated by the large cattle barons against the small rancher.

I won’t get into the whole of the Johnson County War, as I blogged on that in http://www.kirstenlynnwildwest.com/blog/?p=908.  After a series of murders and raids, in the spring of 1892, “regulators” under the leadership of men from the Wyoming Stock Grower’s Association took a train from Cheyenne to Casper where they unloaded and rode into Johnson County. The invaders attacked a small ranch and killed two “rustlers” Nate Champion and Nick Ray.  They then took refuge at a friendly ranch, the TA Ranch.

Angus’ legendary temper and courage surfaced with a vengeance and he rounded up a posse of 48 men that soon grew to an army of anywhere between 200 to 300 men, and surrounded the TA ranch. Many riding, and duly deputized by Sheriff Angus, were cowboys who had worked for the very men they were riding against. The invaders held off Angus’ army by using the natural defenses of the ranch along with well-placed ranch buildings.

Soldiers from Fort McKinney saved the invaders, but Angus issued arrest orders for the “regulators.” His warrants were denied as the soldiers had been called in as a favor to Governor Amos Barber (a supporter of the big cattle barons), who knew the men would be executed if turned over to Red Angus.  Angus secured an agreement that the invaders would be turned over to Civil Authority for trial, and the prisoners were sent to Fort McKinney. Authorities fearing the wrath of the local citizenry transferred the prisoners to Fort D. A. Russell for safe keeping. Their fears may have been justified, a few days after their arrest the barracks at McKinney were bombed by three cowboys.

The Court held that the regulators wouldn’t receive a fair trial in Buffalo and transferred venue to Laramie County. The people of Johnson County had no recourse, as the County simply couldn’t afford the cost of prosecution. In Laramie County, the invaders faced a sympathetic court and were set free.

Sheriff Angus was defeated for reelection and took a job tending bar at the Occidental Hotel, in Buffalo. Later, however, he served as deputy clerk and county treasurer. In 1893, he engaged in a shootout with Arapahoe Brown in the street in front of the hotel. Neither was a very good shot. Doctor Will Frackleton, a circuit riding dentist was in town and witnessed the fight from the doorway of the hotel. Bullets flew into the barroom while the customers ducked for cover. When the fight was over, Frackleton told Angus and Arapahoe, “Well I don’t see what in hell you carry those things for. You fellows can’t hit anything with them.”  The tension dissolved and the men joined the dentist for drink at the bar.

William “Red” Angus remained in Buffalo where he passed away in 1921.

SOURCE:

Davis, John W.  Wyoming Range War: The Infamous Invasion of Johnson County. University of Oklahoma Press, Norman, 2010.

PREVIEW OF THE WIDOW’S LAWMAN (SPRING FREE-READ COMIN’ TO THE CAMPFIRE)

“Hell’s fire and sweet damn! Not her…not today.” Sheriff Russ Avery dropped the shade and stepped back from the window.  One week, one damn week on the job and he’d suffered through at least thirty visits from the widow Ellie Reed.  Next time a lawman offered the choice between swinging from a rope, or taking over as sheriff Russ was gonna choose hangin’…hands down. Hell, he’d even take his own horse and rope and find the cotton wood suitable to get the job done.

A small shadow crossed over the shade and Jake almost tripped over his own boots getting to his desk and falling into his chair. Holding his breath he started thumbing through handbills. If he wasn’t breathing and looked busy maybe she’d just keep going.

“Please Lord have mercy on a miserable sinner.”

“Sheriff Avery, I have a matter I wish to discuss with you.” The widow blew in like a dust storm on the prairie flipping up the shade as she passed by the window.

Jake shielded his eyes against the flood of light as the woman settled into the chair on the opposite side of his desk.  By the bright eager look in her brown eyes and flush on her cheeks, Jake’s gut squeezed.  This was the day he was going to pay for past sins.

Copyright @ 2013, by Kirsten Lynn (This is an original work of Kirsten Lynn any attempt to reprint part or all of this work is strictly prohibited)

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HONORABLE MENTION FOR FLASH FICTION!!

Yee-Haw!! I just took home an honorable mention from Siobhan Muir’s ThursThread (flash fiction) with author Scott Mckinley judging!  Thanks to both Siobhan and Scott! This was a fun exercise to get the ol’ brain workin’!

For those wandering what flash fiction is: you’re given a phrase that has to be incorporated in a scene no longer than 250 words. The phrase for this contest was “Nothing personal, Kid.”

If y’all wanna check out the prose that took this prize, I’ve included the scene below!

“Sonofabitch!” Jack grabbed the foot the protesting big toe hopping like that might ease the throbbing pain. All effects of the whiskey consumed in town died in a flash of pain. “That goddamn trunk…”

A baby’s cry split the air. Every muscle tensed like a well stretched rope. The orange glow of gaslight unveiled a woman’s form gliding across the floorboards of his bedroom to a crib. Was he at the wrong ranch?
Words of comfort drifted back to him as she held the baby until loud bellows turned to hiccups.

Jack dropped his foot. “That ain’t mine!”

The angel in a white cotton gown angled her head meeting his gaze. Green eyes flashed with fire. Lines creased her brow. “Of course he’s not, ya fool. But he’s my responsibility and if I’m sharing your bed, he’s gotta come, too. I can’t be leavin’ him alone.”

“Sharin’ my…” He whistled low remembering morning by the breaking ring.

“Sorry, it’s nothin’ personal, Kid.”

“I’m not a Kid. I just outrode and out roped every man here.”

“There’s a depression goin’ on, Little Lady. Men got families to feed.”

“I need to feed mine, too. What do ya suggest I do?”

“Can ya ride a man like ya handled that mustang?”

“Better.” He saw the lie in her red cheeks.

“Fine. Show up tonight and ya got yerself a job in the house and out.”

“Fine.”

Two sets of green eyes stared at him as he returned to the present. “Sonofabitch.”

PUBLIC ANNOUNCEMENT!!

Thank y’all for comin’ on over to the campfire! You’ve probably been wonderin’ about Cookie and me…then again maybe not! We’ve been on a break, but don’t fret we’ll be back on the trail soon. I’ve been knee deep in writin’ and Cookie has been knee deep in…well y’all know! So please don’t give up on us and keep checkin’ back! In the meantime enjoy the Saturday story RACE TO MARRY!

We sure do appreciate y’all hangin’ in there with us!

–Kirsten Lynn

 

ROUNDUP WINNER!!

A BIG OL’ CAMPFIRE THANK YOU, to Cindy Nord for letting me feature NO GREATER GLORY and for the lesson on what Victoria’s secret really is! And thanks, as always, to those who stopped by and tossed their two cents into the fire!

The winner of an ebook copy of NO GREATER GLORY IS…

ALLY B.

Just hold tight, Ally, and I’ll be gettin’ with ya about your prize!!

See y’all on the trail!!

THE LOOK CHALLENGE

Kathleen Rice Adams, talented writer and my Texas rival in gatherin’ all those wonderful maverick hunks, tagged me in the LOOK Challenge. “Look” is one of those words for which writers are always on the lookout. Like other words related to the senses, “look” can distance readers from the point-of-view character’s experience, so we try to use it with caution. The Look Challenge is a game writers play to remind us to keep an eye out for the overused word and replace it with something more evocative when appropriate. (Plus, the game lets us show off snippets of our works in progress.)

The rules of the Look Challenge require those who’ve been tagged to find the first occurrence of “look” in their work in progress, and then post that sentence and the surrounding paragraph(s). Then they have to tag an unspecified number of friends. Here’s my contribution. This is from the first draft of my wip OPEN FIRES a Western Historical:

He tipped back his Stetson. “Well I won’t smell pretty, Miss Walker, but I’ll be just fine in my shirt and denims.”

Her mouth curved in what might have been the start of a smile for less than a second. She rose gathering the buckskins to her chest. He unfolded from the ground and looked around until he had to make a move. “I’ll just step outside while you change.”

Again a small hand rested on his stopping him quicker than a bullet. She stripped his coat from her shoulders. “You need this.” A tremor shook her body.

“No ma’am you…”

She gave her head a small shake and a flash of fire ignited behind the fear and shock in her eyes. No matter what ordeal the woman faced recently, Nathan recognized an iron will. That warm feeling in his belly started again. He yanked on the coat and stepped outside into the cold Montana night. How the hell did he get into this?

Copyright @ 2012  Kirsten Lynn (no re-printing or copying without permission from the author)

 

 

ROUNDUP WINNERS!!

YEEE-HAW!! We had us a fine time ’round the campfire with Gem Sivad and her cowboys from Eclipse, Texas!! It’s gonna take days to get my blood pressure down!! A BIG OL’ THANK YOU to Gem for allowin’ me to feature this sizzlin’ series!

And as always, I tip my hat to all the folks who dropped by and were kind enough to jaw a bit!

Now for the big announcement! The first name out of the hat and winnin’ a copy of QUINCY’S WOMAN  is…

Cec R.

 

 

 

 

The second name out of the hat and needin’ to by stock in ice for PERFECT STRANGERS is…    

Kristin La Ve’

Enjoy ladies!! I’ll be in contact real soon and Gem will be gettin’ your ebooks to ya soon!

Hope to see y’all on the trail again soon!!

–Kirsten Lynn

WESTERN ROUNDUP BLOG HOP WINNERS!!

YEEE-HAW!! A big ol’ THANK YOU to everyone who stopped by the campfire and jawed with me about the romantic side of the cowboy during the blog hop! Hope y’all will come on by again!

The winners of one ebook of their choice either from the Louis L’Amour books mentioned at the end of the blog OR from past Wednesday Western Roundup blogs on this website are…

KAT R

CHARLENE R

WHOO-EEE!! Congratulations Kat and Charlene! I’ll be contactin’ y’all in two shakes!  Thanks again to all, and I’ll see ya on the trail!

–Kirsten Lynn